Poem I wrote, How is it?

It's very good:) In stanza 3 maybe the second "actually" should be changed to "really". Also, you don't need "I thought" in line 5 stanza 3. You also use "there" too often- maybe find another rhyming word. If you want to use a word a lot have it be one that you want to emphasize, rather than just repeating a word because you need your poem to rhyme. Also tighten up the end a bit. I'm really stretching to criticize though; your poem is amazing! I started crying because it reminds me of 9/11. When 9/11 happened I went out on a dock that looked exactly like the one in the pic to watch the smoke. Keep writing!:)